Sunday, February 23, 2014

Assignment 5: Music & Shel Silverstein's poetry

Hello students,
Read the following two poems by Shel Silverstein, “Daddy, What If?” and “A Boy Named Sue,” then watch the video, clicking the link that follows the poems.
In the video, on "The Johnny Cash Show" in 1970, Shel Silverstein performs both poems; one with the show's host, the famous singer, songwriter, musician, actor Johnny Cash, and the other, in a solo performance. 
Please read both poems, compare and contrast them, in regards to what poetry elements each has, as well as each poem's message,
posting a comment before Tuesday, February 25. 
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Thanks, Ms. H

A Boy Named Sue by Shel Silverstein

Well, my daddy left home when I was three,
and he didn't leave much to Ma and me,
just this old guitar and a bottle of booze.
Now I don't blame him because he run and hid,
but the meanest thing that he ever did was
before he left he went and named me Sue.

Well, he must have thought it was quite a joke,
and it got lots of laughs from a lot of folks,
it seems I had to fight my whole life through.
Some gal would giggle and I'd get red
and some guy would laugh and I'd bust his head,
I tell you, life ain't easy for a boy named Sue.

Well, I grew up quick and I grew up mean.
My fist got hard and my wits got keen.
Roamed from town to town to hide my shame,
but I made me a vow to the moon and the stars,
I'd search the honky tonks and bars and kill
that man that gave me that awful name.

But it was Gatlinburg in mid July and I had
just hit town and my throat was dry.
I'd thought i'd stop and have myself a brew.
At an old saloon in a street of mud
and at a table dealing stud sat the dirty,
mangy dog that named me Sue.

Well, I knew that snake was my own sweet dad
from a worn-out picture that my mother had
and I knew the scar on his cheek and his evil eye.
He was big and bent and gray and old
and I looked at him and my blood ran cold,
and I said, "My name is Sue. How do you do?
Now you're gonna die." Yeah, that's what I told him.

Well, I hit him right between the eyes and he went down
but to my surprise he came up with a knife
and cut off a piece of my ear. But I busted a chair
right across his teeth. And we crashed through
the wall and into the street kicking and a-gouging
in the mud and the blood and the beer.

I tell you I've fought tougher men but I really can't remember when.
He kicked like a mule and bit like a crocodile.
I heard him laughin' and then I heard him cussin',
he went for his gun and I pulled mine first.
He stood there looking at me and I saw him smile.

And he said, "Son, this world is rough and if
a man's gonna make it, he's gotta be tough
and I knew I wouldn't be there to help you along.
So I gave you that name and I said 'Goodbye'.
I knew you'd have to get tough or die. And it's
that name that helped to make you strong."

Yeah, he said, "Now you have just fought one
helluva fight, and I know you hate me and you've
got the right to kill me now and I wouldn't blame you
if you do. But you ought to thank me
before I die for the gravel in your guts and the spit
in your eye because I'm the nut that named you Sue."
Yeah, what could I do? What could I do?

I got all choked up and I threw down my gun,
called him pa and he called me a son,
and I came away with a different point of view
and I think about him now and then.
Every time I tried, every time I win and if I
ever have a son I think I am gonna name him
Bill or George - anything but Sue.

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“Daddy, What If?”  by Shel Silverstein

Daddy, what if the sun stopped shining?
What would happen then?

If the sun stopped shining, you'd be so surprised
You'd stare at the heavens with wide open eyes,
And the wind would carry your light to the skies
And the sun would start shining again.

But, Daddy, what if the wind stopped blowing?
What would happen then?

 If the wind stopped blowing, then the land would be dry,
And your boat wouldn't sail and, son, your kite couldn't fly,
And the grass would see your trouble and she'd tell the wind,
And the wind would start blowing again.

But, Daddy, what if the grass stopped growing?
What would happen then?

Well, if the grass stopped growing you'd probably cry,
And the ground would be watered by the tears from your eyes,
And like your love for me, that grass would grow so high.
Yes, the grass would start growing again.

But, Daddy, what if I stopped loving you?
What would happen then?

If you stopped loving me, then the grass would stop growing,
The sun would stop shining and the wind would stop blowing.
So you see, if you wanna keep this old world a'going,
You'd better start loving me again…

YouTube video: http://youtu.be/7e5ZVIpB4sw


14 comments:

  1. Hi Mrs. Haydee its Carlos Jimenez I think that this poems both talk about a kid that stopped loving his dad butt in the end the love their dads again.

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  2. Hi Miss Haydee, it's Dario. I think that the two poems are about a kid who stopped loving his dad, but there is always a happy ending, that is when the kid starts loving his dad again.

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  3. Hi Ms. Haydee:

    This is Fabian. I think these poems are about loving your parents no matter what, you should still love them. Even if you are angry with your dad you should love and obey him.
    The poems have metaphors and similes and have a little of rhymes at the beginning and at the end. I had heard Johnny Cash singing a Boy named Sue because my parents like his music a lot.

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  4. Hi Mrs.Haydee , it's Jose.I think this poem is about dad's.They also say to love your parents. I loved both poems they are based in love

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  5. Hi Ms. Haydee: The poems are about the love for your parents, no matter how bad the situation might be this love will overcome it. The first poem is more violent and shows hate, the second one not. The poems have similes, rhymes and personification. Nicolas Ortiz

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  6. Hi Ms. Haydee!!! Its Waleska! The poem, A boy named Sue, has rhyme, simile, metaphor and repetition. The poem, Daddy, What if?, has rhythm, personification and repetition. Both have repetition. The message of these poems is to love our parents unconditionally. Bye!!!!

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  7. Ms. Haydee it's Anibal. Both poems are about father and son. The poem A Boy Named Zue has end rhyme, and the poem Daddy what if has repetition. The message of both poems is that if you hate your parents you will see everything without happiness.

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  8. Hello Ms. Haydee it's Liselie. Both poems talk about a son and a father. But one father was there for his son and the other one was absent. One father was more severe and the other one was really loving.

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  9. Hi Ms Haydee is Maritere i think both poems talk about the relationship between father and son. In a named Sue the relationship is very hatefull and violent but at the end love survives. In dad what if the father and son relationship is very loving

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  10. Hi Ms.Haydee. It's Geidyliz Contreras. I think that the poems are about the love between father and son. Both of them talk about family love, but they also have differences because one of them has violence and the other one doesn't have violence. This poem has rhythm.

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  11. Hi Ms.Haydee its Angel and I think this two poems compare with family relationships with father and son and they end differently because one was very violent and the other was very loving, and in the Johnny Cash Show shel silverstein was singing his poems and like you said songs are poems in action.

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  12. Hi Ms. Haydee is Faustinelli. For me both poem has rhyme and rythm and in the firs one found similes. The poems has love as a comun theme but in the first one , love was a result of the hate that the son has for his father after he understand his intentions. In the second on , it show us how important is to love your parents no matter what and to do not be afraid of accepting it.

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  13. Hi Ms. Haydee this is Carla... I think that the first poem is about a father that named his son Sue so he can be strong an would fight to find who named him Sue. I think that the second poem is about a child that was asking ahis father questions about earth, but the last one could be the end of the world to is father, because we should love every body anyway,

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  14. Hi Ms. Haydee, I think that this two poems talk about different kind of relation between a father and a son. One of the poem the father has a close relation with the son. The other one there is no figuere of the father in the house.

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